The thunder is the sinner… It sins to defy the clouds. It roars for the agony, yells curses at the gloom.
And oh! How the world gasps at the sight of that war!
Those tiny drops of water… the ones to abandon the magnificence of the heavens… the ones to fall on the loathed and barren fields. They will be cursed for their compassion!
Those clouds… those cruel and audacious clouds, they just deprived the world of its light. They dared to contempt the sun. They will be doomed with the wrath of coward hearts… The ones who are scared of the dark.
These winds… they must be held for causing bereavement. They left another house in drought. They left the thirsty throats suffering… dry and choking… to bring rains to another land of arid torture.
All of these… they are sinners.
Guilty…
They must be sued…
For caressing the wounds of the broken hearts…
For bringing love to the despised…
For bringing peace to the devastated…
For bringing hope to the forlorn…
That is how the world works…
We need to follow the law of the land…
Powerful.👏👏
I love your writing style and
I absolutely loved your ‘When I walked through’ series ..keep it up
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Aww! Thank you so much! I am so glad you like my writing style! 🤗
Your comment made my day! That series is very close to my heart 💕
Thank you so much for all the amazing support! Always a pleasure to have you here ☺️
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😍😍your most welcome .🤗
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🤗🤗💕…
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Aha! Wonderful writing Gauri. You have a fan in me. Absolutely loved it ❤️
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Awww! Thank you so much Radhika! You’re comment made my day! Thanks you so much for all the amazing support. Always a pleasure to have you here 💕
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Fabulous poem!
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Lovely style and use of words,
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it!💕
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Wow. This is so freaking good!
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Thank you so much Bharath! I am so glad you like it!💙
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Beautifully articulated 💯
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Thank you so much Nirant! I am so glad you like it 🖤
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Pleasure always for ur words mate 👍
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(✿◠‿◠)🖤…
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Profound
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it 💕
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My pleasure
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😊💕…
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This is so amazingly written!
Please tell me that you’re a language student! 😉
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Aww! Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it 💕
No! I am a science student!🙈😂
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My pleasure!
Wait, what?! Seriously?! Biology or mathematics m
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☺️…
Yeah!🙈 Biology!😊
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Ohh. How was it?! Did you enjoy?!
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Well! I hated it enough to change my major to physics!!😂
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Oh well, that’s great!😂😂
How would you describe your 11th and 12th standard??
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😂😂
Well! “Torturous” is the word!😂😆
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Oopsies!😂😂
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😂😂😅😅
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Nice!
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Thank you so much 💕
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This is just too lovely!
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it ☺️
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Indeed I did.
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Thanks 😊
Have a great day ahead 😃
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This poem’s soo deep and I liked the way you depicted the clouds and stuff like a living beings .
You just filled life in them
Plus it brings forth the injustice that the people who deserve water aren’t getting it and the ones getting it are not worth it .
It’s an amazing poem
10/10
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Thank you so much Suyash! I am so glad you like my work! Thanks for such a beautiful comment, it made my day 💕
Yeah! I agree. The ones getting the rains aren’t even grateful for what they get! I am so glad that the vision could reach across 😃
Thanks for stopping by!
Have a great day ahead 🙂
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Well done!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Amazing way to look at it…quite a drift from contemporary yet distinctive of human nature to blame.Thanks for projecting this side of man.Beautiful.
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I read this and I don’t know why I can’t see my comment 🤔 it requires some very deep soul to write such words, the images you draw are philosophical and poignant! We need to follow the law of the land indeed!
Amazing as usually Gauri 😊💕
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I agree! Recently, some comments have been vanishing from WordPress! I don’t even know how! My spam section is empty, but people tell me that they commented and I just can’t see those 😵😵
Thank you so so so much huguette!🤗🤗💕💕
Your comments always overwhelm me and fill me with a lot of happiness! I am so glad that you like my work!🤗
Very true! We need to follow the law of the land 🙂
Thank you so much once again! Have a great day ahead 😊💕
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I like it
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Thank you so much!😄
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Hi there. Thank you for connecting. Your writings speak to me. 🙂
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