Deep…
Deep down in my heart;
Buried in my soul;
Are the truths to my lies…
Lies…
Those lies which I hurl;
Hurl at the world,
When folks try to sneak in,
Through my lamenting eyes;
Seeking the way to my vulnerable
heart…
Vulnerabilities…
They are an enigma, aren’t they?
In this world, we conspire…
Force people to bare their fragility;
But strive to armour ours…
We…
We are fools…
And the pursuit of power and strength;
That’s our folly…
The bait in the rat race,
Is nothing…
But, the most splendid of all the lies,
That ever escaped the mouths of the “Wise”…
For… the forts;
They were never our strength,
But a futile attempt, an illusion…
Played at the invader,
An attack on his frailty…
For… Not even a single ounce of blood,
Was shed for victory…
But… we bled our way to the doomed oblivion,
Just to run away from defeat…
Remarkable, gory.
You’re getting darker these days.
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Aww! Thank you so much Bharath! I am so glad you like it!😊😊
Also, you know my style…😎😎😎
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brilliant!
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Thank you so much 😊😊
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🙂 my pleasure.
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This makes me think of a warrior whose torn and hurt… but is still trying to defend his/her kingdom
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Aww! That comment made my day!
You spoke my mind, that’s exactly what I was trying to illustrate!😊
I am so glad… Thanks for the read and interaction 😊😊
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Beautiful word Gauriwalecha, they paint a lovely visualisation.
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it! And that I was able to paint my vision for the reader 😊😊
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Beautiful, very deep
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it!😊😊
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Oh-so-beautiful-gory!😁. Great job👌👍👍🤗
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Thank you so much 🤗🤗🤗
I am so so glad you like it.
Thanks for the read and interaction 💕💕
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We are liars fighting our own truths…that’s why we never win anything…we just lose. We’re all weak, fragile, defeatable because we depends on those illusions to tell us who we are when we know who we are…and what dwells within. Very clever, adored it ❤
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Absolutely true! All of us, we are fighting, yes… But not for the right cause. We are fighting to run away from our weaknesses, to establish the proof of our strength, in front of the world. Our wars are futile attempts to achieve the same. In the end, all of us lose, to life… And to our souls.💕💕💕
Thank you so much Nour. It is always a pleasure to have you here. You always spot the underlying meaning behind my post and that feels so nice😊😊
Thank you for taking the time to read and interact 💕
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Absolutely brilliant – we all are fighting are battles – but very few for the truth –
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Very very true! All of us fight to establish the lie of our strength.
Thank you so much for the read and the interaction. Means a lot.
I am so glad you like the post.😊😊
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My absolute pleasure dear
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😊😊
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At first, the poem is a most amazing one and the blog is a masterpiece!
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Thank you so so so much 💕💕
That means so much to me! I am so glad you like the blog and the post 😊💕
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Well the forts we build to protect us are just illusions ans lies! Our vulnerabilities are enigmas or maybe they are our real forts when we embrace them and when the lies can’t find a place to our soul, nobody can defeat us I guess otherwise we will live in a constant lie and our forts are just weak lies!
Very deep Gauri, you need to have mercy on our poor and humble minds 😊💕💕
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Very very true! Vulnerabilities are often frowned upon. People think that they make a person weak. But if we embrace them and work with them, instead of working against them, we can go places. That’s real strength, the skill to accept and embrace weakness.😊😊💕💕
🙈🙈🙈 I am so glad you like it!😊💕💕
I am so sorry 😅😅🙈
Thanks for the read and interaction.💕 Means a lot 💕💕
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Thank you Gauri 😊 it was a joke of course, don’t stop being brilliant 😊💕 always a great pleasure
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My pleasure 😊😊
😂😂 Thank you for the lovely words😊😊💕
..😊💕💕
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Beautifully penned! ❤
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Thank you so much 💕💕
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We all go through some dark shades of life.. sometimes it is really difficult to live with all truths.
Thoroughly enjoyed!!
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Thank you so much! I am so glad that you enjoyed the read 💕💕
Very true! Truth, although liberating, can sometimes add a huge pressure on your shoulders. I am so glad that the message came across. 😊😊
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Beautifully written truth about the lies we tell to ourselves ❤🌸
And it’s so true that we want others to show their vulnerabilities to us but we build big strong walls or armour(like you said) around us to protect ourselves. And in all this we forget that vulnerability isn’t something to be ashamed off. It’s not a sign of weakness but a sign of courage. Because only a brave courageous person can embrace their vulnerable self.😊
Loved the way you wrote about such a wonderful topic😊❤
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Aww! Thank you so much! I am so glad you like my piece of work!☺️💕
Very very true! We shouldn’t be shamed of our weaknesses and vulnerabilities. Rather, if we embrace them, they turn into our biggest strength and help us shine brighter.💕💕
Thank you so much for the read and interaction. Means a lot 😊💕💕
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Gauri, I love your heart. Warrior you are. Till the end. ❤️
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Aww! Thank you so much! That comment made my day! I am so glad you like my piece of work!😊💕💕
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Yes it is so profound. I love it!
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Aww! Thank youuuuu!🤗
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No lies can protect ourselves! Better accept our vulnerabilities and try to work towards it!
Very deep words Gauri!
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Exactly! Rather than hiding behind shallow lies, we should start working on our deep rooted vulnerabilities and weaknesses.
Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it 😊💕💕
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Very good piece, I enjoyed the read so I am going to reblog this one for you.
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Awww! Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for considering it for a re-blog! Means a lot 💕💕
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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Thank you so much for the re-blog! Means so much 💕😊
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Sometimes I wonder if man is the smartest living being or the dumbest…
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😂😂 So relatable! I guess, we people are smart at being dumb!😆
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